Improve wording, punctuation, etc.
Signed-off-by: Gilles Peskine <Gilles.Peskine@arm.com>
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/dtls-connection-id.txt b/ChangeLog.d/dtls-connection-id.txt
index eb9e216..0d0a71f 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/dtls-connection-id.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/dtls-connection-id.txt
@@ -5,12 +5,13 @@
Changes
* Previously the macro MBEDTLS_SSL_DTLS_CONNECTION_ID implemented version 05
- of the draft, and was marked experimental and disabled by default. It is
- now no longer experimental, and implements the final version from RFC 9146,
- which is not interoperable with the draft-05 version. If you need to
- communicate with peers that use earlier versions of Mbed TLS, you
- need to define MBEDTLS_SSL_DTLS_CONNECTION_ID_COMPAT to 1, but then you
- won't be able to communicate with peers that use the standard (non-draft)
- version. If you need to interoperate with both classes of peers with the
+ of the IETF draft, and was marked experimental and disabled by default.
+ It is now no longer experimental, and implements the final version from
+ RFC 9146, which is not interoperable with the draft-05 version.
+ If you need to communicate with peers that use earlier versions of
+ Mbed TLS, you need to define MBEDTLS_SSL_DTLS_CONNECTION_ID_COMPAT to 1,
+ but then you won't be able to communicate with peers that use the standard
+ (non-draft) version.
+ If you need to interoperate with both classes of peers with the
same build of Mbed TLS, please let us know about your situation on the
mailing list or GitHub.
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/extend-query_compile_time_config-to-psa_want.txt b/ChangeLog.d/extend-query_compile_time_config-to-psa_want.txt
index b268fd4..99b2ec4 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/extend-query_compile_time_config-to-psa_want.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/extend-query_compile_time_config-to-psa_want.txt
@@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
Changes
- * Add the ability to query PSA_WANT_xxx macros to query_compile_time_config
+ * Add the ability to query PSA_WANT_xxx macros to query_compile_time_config.
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/fix_build_error_for_mbedtls_deprecated_removed.txt b/ChangeLog.d/fix_build_error_for_mbedtls_deprecated_removed.txt
index a70521a..f0fa000 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/fix_build_error_for_mbedtls_deprecated_removed.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/fix_build_error_for_mbedtls_deprecated_removed.txt
@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
Bugfix
- * Fix build error due to missing prototype
- warning when MBEDTLS_DEPRECATED_REMOVED is enabled
+ * Fix a build error due to a missing prototype warning when
+ MBEDTLS_DEPRECATED_REMOVED is enabled.
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/fix_build_tls1_2_with_single_encryption_type.txt b/ChangeLog.d/fix_build_tls1_2_with_single_encryption_type.txt
index bac4910..c7d2691 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/fix_build_tls1_2_with_single_encryption_type.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/fix_build_tls1_2_with_single_encryption_type.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
Bugfix
- * Fix bugs and missing dependencies when
- building and testing configurations with
- only one encryption type enabled in TLS 1.2.
+ * Fix bugs and missing dependencies when building and testing
+ configurations with only one encryption type enabled in TLS 1.2.
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/fix_cmake_using_iar_toolchain.txt b/ChangeLog.d/fix_cmake_using_iar_toolchain.txt
index ecc09c2..9ec6e0d 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/fix_cmake_using_iar_toolchain.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/fix_cmake_using_iar_toolchain.txt
@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
Bugfix
- * Fixed an issue that cause compile error using CMake IAR toolchain.
+ * Fix a compilation error when using CMake with an IAR toolchain.
Fixes #5964.
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/fix_tls13_session_resumption_fail_when_hostname_is_not_localhost.txt b/ChangeLog.d/fix_tls13_session_resumption_fail_when_hostname_is_not_localhost.txt
index 5797f48..9f5c649 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/fix_tls13_session_resumption_fail_when_hostname_is_not_localhost.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/fix_tls13_session_resumption_fail_when_hostname_is_not_localhost.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
Bugfix
- * Fix TLS 1.3 session resumption fail. Fixes #6488.
- * Add configuration check to exclude TLS 1.3 optional authentication of
- client.
+ * Fix TLS 1.3 session resumption. Fixes #6488.
+ * Add a configuration check to exclude optional client authentication
+ in TLS 1.3 (where it is forbidden).
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/fix_zeroization.txt b/ChangeLog.d/fix_zeroization.txt
index ad74d9c..8b00dcc 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/fix_zeroization.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/fix_zeroization.txt
@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
Bugfix
- * Fix possible crash in TLS PRF code, if a failure to allocate memory occurs.
- Reported by Michael Madsen in #6516.
+ * Fix a possible null pointer dereference if a memory allocation fails
+ in TLS PRF code. Reported by Michael Madsen in #6516.
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/mbedtls_asn1_type_free.txt b/ChangeLog.d/mbedtls_asn1_type_free.txt
index 81f3a20..a6792af 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/mbedtls_asn1_type_free.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/mbedtls_asn1_type_free.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
Features
- * Shared code to free x509 structs like mbedtls_x509_named_data
+ * Shared code to free x509 structs like mbedtls_x509_named_data.
New deprecations
* Deprecate mbedtls_asn1_free_named_data().
Use mbedtls_asn1_free_named_data_list()
- or mbedtls_asn1_free_named_data_list_shallow()
+ or mbedtls_asn1_free_named_data_list_shallow().
diff --git a/ChangeLog.d/tls13-misc.txt b/ChangeLog.d/tls13-misc.txt
index 497ed38..b76bb91 100644
--- a/ChangeLog.d/tls13-misc.txt
+++ b/ChangeLog.d/tls13-misc.txt
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
Features
- * Mbed TLS supports TLS 1.3 key establishment via pre-shared keys,
+ * Mbed TLS now supports TLS 1.3 key establishment via pre-shared keys,
pre-shared keys provisioned externally or via the ticket mechanism
(session resumption).
- The MBEDTLS_SSL_SESSION_TICKETS configuration option controls the support
- for the ticket mechanism.
- MBEDTLS_SSL_TLS1_3_KEY_EXCHANGE_MODE_xxx_ENABLED configuration options
- have been introduced to control the support for the three possible
- TLS 1.3 key exchange modes.
+ The ticket mechanism is supported when the configuration option
+ MBEDTLS_SSL_SESSION_TICKETS is enabled.
+ New options MBEDTLS_SSL_TLS1_3_KEY_EXCHANGE_MODE_xxx_ENABLED
+ control the support for the three possible TLS 1.3 key exchange modes.
